1 film down

i finished editing David, as its now called. its about 11 minutes long, which is pretty much as long as it can be, but i dont feel it drags on, im really happy with the way the film illustrates a way of life very much outside your average viewer's experience. also, it was important to me, after meeting many friendly and interesting homeless people at the 999 club, to show that rough sleepers are approachable people and dont deserve the stigma they usually get.

however i started to edit the other film, and it soon became clear that i was setting my sights too high, in terms of cutting 6 or so different half hour interviews down to 5 minutes. Also with many of the interviews spanning different topics, the message of the documentary was lost. i was trying to tell a story about the 999 club but at the same time didnt want to lose all of the interesting life stories the various users of the centre had told me. so i was advised to just concentrate on perfecting David. i also think that had i continued with this second film, if it had been as bad as it was starting to look then it may have had a detrimental effect on the first.